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After Dinner - Color by kaafan33

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Over all VERY good image. The bulge is wonderfully detailed(although i think her nipples, face, etc could be showing but thats just my opinion, not truly necessary). Judging by the "Mmmf!" and "wiggle" text the woman doesnt want be there. If that is the case then I think that her body should be more contorted. Like her head twisted back, a leg bent and a leg kicking, her breasts and stomach pressed up from her stretching and arching of her back, and her arms attempting to flail about. Agian, a VERY good pick, love to see more, keep it up! Only a few minor tweaks to make. Live well!
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kaafan33 Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Sorry for the late reply, but thanks for the critique! :)
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Creaturedude Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013
Np man! You are an awesome artist. While I can draw animals I cant draw humanoids worth beans :P haha
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kaafan33 Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks XD yeah, people can be difficult to draw. Especially limbs like hands, lol.
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Creaturedude Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013
Yes!!! I hate hands!! XD
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